Damn that's a cool sounding plot. I definitely like the idea of a platonic relationship between the RHPG and KA&T's kid, because that's pretty rare in stories. I think the way you're telling the story would confuse me at first (but only at first, because I'd like to think I'd catch on after that) and it sounds like a real challange to write (at least to me it does. I don't know, maybe for you it's easy).
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Damn that's a cool sounding plot. I definitely like the idea of a platonic relationship between the RHPG and KA&T's kid, because that's pretty rare in stories. I think the way you're telling the story would confuse me at first (but only at first, because I'd like to think I'd catch on after that) and it sounds like a real challange to write (at least to me it does. I don't know, maybe for you it's easy).
Good luck. Hopefully you'll win. ;)